First, this hotel is unique. It is not a tall building with a lot of rooms in it. It is in a park. There are lots of small houses in different places, and they are separated. The check-in place is a house, too. To the point, we live in houses.
Secondly, there is lake. There are water everywhere, and there are lots of islands. The houses were built on these islands. Each island has one or two houses. Guests and tourists need to ride a boat to get to the houses.
Then, there are nature. There are flowers and animals. After exploring the territories, I found these a lot of animals. There are ducks and squirrels. The ducks always duck their heads into the water to get fish. A lot of ducks are as small as my fist(I am not using hyperbole, the ducks are as small as that)! They are pretty good swimmers. The flowers are beautiful. One of them is like the peacocks' tail(the difference is that it is purple, neither blue nor green). 
Finally, there is a traditional food. It is called "糯米团子". It is very yummy! It is white wheat and rice cakes with sweetened beans paste in it. People say that it was first invented by an old lady.
That is all for today, bye!
Great! If I could go there, I would not miss anything you visited and said in this essay! 👍🏻
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ReplyDeleteHere is the corrected essay writing: Hi! Now, I am in HangZhou. This place is extremely fun. Let me introduce the hotel to you, and you must be interested to go there!
ReplyDeleteFirst, this hotel is unique. It is not a tall building with a lot of rooms in it. It is in a park. There are lots of small houses in different places, and they are separated. The check-in place is a house, too. To the point, we live in houses.
Secondly, there is a lake. There is water everywhere, and there are lots of islands. The houses were built on these islands. Each island has one or two houses. Guests and tourists need to ride a boat to get to the houses.
Then, there is nature. There are flowers and animals. After exploring the territories, I found these a lot of animals. There are ducks and squirrels. The ducks always duck their heads into the water to get fish. A lot of ducks are as small as my fist(I am not using hyperbole, the ducks are as small as that)! They are pretty good swimmers. The flowers are beautiful. One of them is like the peacocks' tail(the difference is that it is purple, neither blue nor green).
Finally, there is a traditional food. It is called "糯米团子". It is very yummy! It is white wheat and rice cakes with sweetened beans paste in it. People say that it was first invented by an old lady.
That is all for today, bye.
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